I’ve been writing about the progress of my song “Choose” for the 2015 SAC Challenge. Rob Wells has challenged us to write a pop song for a female vocalist and aimed at the teen market. Oh, and keep it under 3:30.
This is outside my comfort zone but I’ve managed to cobble something together. Thematically the lyrics centre on the idea of having “choices” and the girl wanting the boy to commit to choosing her.
I’m singing on the demo but clearly it would be better to have a female vocalist doing it (if anyone is interested I can provide the music bed).
The melody could be a bit stronger in my opinion but I’m happy with the overall results, especially given that at the beginning of the week I wasn’t sure if I was going to have anything at all to share.
It’s a simple chord progression all the way through (D/G/B/A) and relies on changes in the lyric phrasing to give it a sense of movement. The song doesn’t have a bridge per se, although I stuck in a short break before returning to the chorus.
Apple loops are used for the rhythm tracks but I played the other synth parts that embellish it. I also snuck a little bit of distorted guitar in the final section to give it some grit.
Here are the revised lyrics as sung on the demo. A link to the song is below the lyrics.
Choose
When it comes to music-
you have to make a choice
do you like it straight or swing-
do you want to dance or sing
When it comes to movies-
you’ve got to make a choice
do you want to laugh or cry-
or do you like a thrill ride
When it comes to a lover’s test-
it’s multiple choice
it’s your voice
so what’s it gonna be boy-
A, B, C, or D
I know love is strong-
but if you wait too long
I’ll be gone before you know it
So you can make your move-
you know I will approve
and I’ll love you over and over again
Let’s not wait forever-
to be together
you don’t want to lose me-
it’s time to choose
When it comes to candy-
you have to make a choice
do you like it sticky sweet-
do you like to trick or treat
When it comes to fashion-
you’ve got to make a choice
do you go for Calvin Klein-
or any old design
When it comes to a lover’s test ….
[repeat chorus]