In my last post I shared the chorus for a song called “Choose.” One thing I admire about the pop formula is how songwriters will establish a unified theme around a simple concept and play with it in the verse development.
Echosmith’s “Bright” is a love song that uses astronomical imagery as a unifying theme:
Did you see that shooting star tonight?
Were you dazzled by the same constellation?
Did you and Jupiter conspire to get me?
I think you and the Moon and Neptune got it right
I think you and the Moon and Neptune got it right
I think you and the Moon and Neptune got it right
‘Cause now I’m shining bright, so bright
Bright, so bright
Bright, so bright
And I get lost in your eyes tonight
This kind of writing takes a simple, everyday word or cliche and puts a new spin on it. I love the ingenuity in it.
So, for “Choose” I’m working on the idea of choice as a thematic motif. I’ve started to develop some verse ideas. I’ll share them in my next post.